Tuesday 14th June
Whilst clearing through some papers and old photographs, I came across a poem that you had written at Primary School.
You were ten years old in 1995 and were looking at pollution and creative writing.
An insightful and astute mind at work.
“The Dying River
I ran to the river.
I used to play there.
Sparkling river.
Like jewels in the sun.
Birds and fish were happy and healthy.
Blue, fresh and clean.
Then came the factory.
Pumping filth.
Poisons and chemicals.
Killing the fish.
Suffocating them.
The birds have left.
The rats have come.
Green, scummy and smelly.”
I wish you were still here; reading, writing, speaking and enjoying the written and spoken word.
I love you so much sweetheart.
Beloved Angel son.
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Very beautiful and moving.
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Thank you.
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Beautifully written. Talented son. 💓
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Thank you Una.
He really was quite a treasure.
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What a beautiful, bittersweet poem he wrote!
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Yes, I’m so glad I saved it.
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A wonderful memory for you.
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Thank you, it really is.
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The poem is a delight and I am glad you still have it after so many years. He had true talent.
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Thank you very much indeed.
He loved his books and enjoyed a wide variety of fiction, fantasy and fact.
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It’s so beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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A wonderful poem… written with such sensitivity! Lovely piece of creative work. 🙂
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Very many thanks.
Much appreciated.
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sad, expression!
poignantly, the river is us
all.
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Thank you for your kind thoughts.
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That is good
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Thank you.
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This made me feel good and sad. The poem is very good
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Thank you so much.
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So sweet
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Thank you Lynn.
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This was very special!
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So very kind.
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Reblogged this on A Dose of Inspiration and commented:
Thank you so much for sharing!! This is an amazing observation, especially by someone so young. Such wisdom & intelligence. Beautifully written and beautiful photos! Your son’s light resonates with my own. Thank you for keeping it alive and sharing with the world. ❤ Much love to you, always.
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Thank you for your caring comments.
Very much appreciated.
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you very much.
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This is poignantly lovely,xx
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Thank you very much.
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A sweet poem from a young person. Lovely.
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Thank you so much.
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great work…
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Thank you.
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