Apr5

Lost

Posted on April 5, 2023 by MeRaw

Wednesday 5th April 

A life lost 
Is a song cut short 
A melody 
Left hanging in the air 

A dance 
With no final step 
A rhythm disrupted 
With a soul laid bare 

A fairytale 
Without an ending 
Trip of a lifetime 
On a train to nowhere 

Love you so much 
Precious sons 
Beloved Mum 
xxxxx

Two masted gaff schooner, the sailing vessel Mariette, with the tug, Kommandor Orca, in the background

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joannerambling on April 5, 2023 at 9:27 pm said:

The loss can be heartbreaking

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- MeRaw on April 13, 2023 at 7:50 pm said:
  
  Indeed.
  x 💖 x
  
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katiesencouragementforyou on April 5, 2023 at 11:35 pm said:

love your comparisons in your poems. I especially like your first comparison, “A life lost, is a song cut short, a melody left hanging in the air.” Really poignant–and emotional. Thank you.

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- MeRaw on April 13, 2023 at 7:51 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much.
  Your words mean a lot to me.
  x 💖 x
  
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  - katiesencouragementforyou on April 15, 2023 at 5:17 pm said:
    
    As does yours to me. 🙂 Hope you are having a beautiful day!!
    
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  - MeRaw on May 8, 2023 at 6:49 pm said:
    
    Thank you very much indeed.
    x 😊 x
    
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